I've seen better from you
Definitely not your strongest piece of work. I don't know what exactly the idea behind this flash was. I suppose you merely wanted to give Afro and Pokelord a shot at voice-acting, is that correct? Because for the rest the jokes and such are quite similar to your former flashes and it doesn't create any new storylines either.
Anyway I think the (different) voices were not bad for this one. Afro did a nice job in my opinion, although his voice doesn't really fit the Afro_Stud I know from your flash series. I think Pokelord did a good job as Graham. He sounded much like you actually. Also, it was kinda funny to hear Graham laugh like a little girl near the end (tee hee hee).
Overall 6 out of 10, 3 out of 5. Like I said, not your best piece of work. I think it's good that you didn't turn this into another mini-series. It didn't have a lot of potential as far as I can see.
~Auz