Graham...
Well, I assume your goal has always been to make fun out of Graham and make him seem like a dick whenever he's in one of your flashes. I guess you succeeded in that, because I've always found him the least likable character you have ever come up with. What's up between the two of you anyway?
But I thought this flash was short but sweet. It contained a lot of funny moments actually. Like Graham living in a monopoly hotel and the sound of his car made me chuckle. The gap scene was also funny. I thought he was gonna end up in hell or something, but then fell through the floor again and then he landed :p
The landing could have used some sort of impact sound though.
Overall 7 out of 10, 3 out of 5. It's short, but I thought this was one of your funnier flashes thus far.
~Auz