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Auz

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As I said in the Nintendo Club, I like your cartoons and I hope you'll submit more of them.

This isn't the best one I've encountered, but it gave me a chuckle nonetheless. What I like is how you still add so much detail to the drawings, even though they're only made for silly little jokes. Most cartoons I've seen of this sort have half-assed drawings, but you actually take the time to add shades, colours, little effects and other details. Plus points on that.

What I'm wondering is how you can manage to think of so many puns with video game characters. You got over 40 on your website already and it's not even like they're getting more farfetched or anything. You do a good job at keeping the quality consistent.

As I've also said, I think it's a nice idea if you started animating these. I think it will work if you can get some good voice-actors for it.

4.5/5

Keep up the excellent work.

~Auz

TerminalMontage responds:

Thank you :] yeah I'm thinking about animating them :)

It looks really good to me. I like the "waterfall" tears, I like the perspective and I like the details on the mouth, nose, eyes and ears.

It seems a bit like an unfinished, unpolished piece of work to me though. I can still see a lot of (help?) lines and marks that seem to have been whiped with an eraser. Obviously I'm missing the hair, a part of the neckline and a cheek. Of course it could be that you never intended to draw all those things, but I think it would've been really nice if you had worked on those things as well before you submitted it.

In any case, it's a very nice drawing. Way better than I could ever do. I'm sure the end result (if this isn't a finished work) would've been amazing.

Overall 4.5 out of 5. Keep up the excellent work.

~Auz

Chimbley responds:

hahaha thanks man. It's a little difficult for me to categorize this drawing. It is a sketch thats for sure, but I kind of dig the unfinished look to art; it's like the viewer is seeing the process, the strokes and the lines that the artist used in creating the piece. Like seeing the framework of an animation; the steps the artist took. Like leaving spaces blank and open for interpretation hahaha idk. I'm really OCD about drawing, so I often don't finish them at all haha. I am also very messy and I smudge and erase and I just leave it there. I'd like to say it adds to the overall visual effect but thats bullshit haha i'm just messy.

That's a cute little drawing in my opinion. It seems very suitable for a Paper Mario type of Zelda game. I don't know if that was what you were aiming for, but if so you did a good job.

It could be my browser or computer, but the animation seems a little choppy. Maybe you could upgrade the FPS a little bit to make the animation a bit smoother. Again, it could be a problem on my end so perhaps you should test it again (or wait for more reviews).

Anyway, overall 4 out of 5. Nice job. Keep up the good work.

~Auz

mnrART responds:

You need to fix something I can say that much ^^
becaus I only make very smooth animations that is wiggling.
But thank you for the review :3

Well done.

It's a pretty cute drawing in my opinion. It has a nice and relaxing use of colors. You're right in that the white cat doesn't stand out very much. I don't think that's necessarily a bad thing though. Perhaps it makes the drawing more peaceful and subtle this way.

Overall 9 out of 10, 5 out of 5. Nice work :)

~Auz

Puny responds:

Thanks alot, I was actually going for that peaceful feel. Glad someone feels the same ;)

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