Pretty good
Hey not bad. Deffinatly not bad. The style of the movie was quite nice, with all the colors and the 60's music. I must say I actually kinda liked the song. I´m personally quite a fan of 60's and 70's music, so good choice of music in my opinion. Also it´s nice to see a music video with an older song. The average choice of music here is songs from bands like Muse (really don´t like them) or Linkin Park or whatever, so it´s nice to see a change.
As for what to improve. Well, the drawings could´ve been slightly better. And then I am especially talking about the people in the movie, as most of the other stuff looked nice actually (pidgeons were very good). I´m not saying that the people were drawn badly, it was surely much better then I have ever done, but still they seemed fairly basic.
Another complaint that I have is that the movie kinda dragged on a bit. It was rather long and I must admit that I got kinda bored in the end. So perhaps next time make your vids a little shorter (or find a way to keep it interesting until the very end).
Overall 7 out of 10, 3 out of 5. All in all I must say I liked it really. I think you have quite a lot of potential. I would say just keep practicing on drawing and I´m sure you´re not gonna have that much trouble with winning any awards in the future.
~Auz