Fantastic
Fantastic! I agree with Coop, the build up was great and I read your "Can you guys imagine what kind of things would do StrawberryClock if he was the reaper?" comment and I was summing up like a million things in my head as to what could happen and what would StrawberryClock do and what would be the consequences and what would his grandmother think about it.
And then the plot twist came and EVERYTHING was turned upside down 0.0
When the credits rolled I swear I had to wipe away a tear. Great choice of music there, I wouldn't see any other song more fitting than YMCA by The Village People.
Also I was happy and proud to beta test this for you.
Overall 10 out of 10, 5 out of 5. An excellent piece of work. I don't see why this submissions hasn't been getting straight 10's and a blue score. It's as if people are forgetting to vote 5 today.
~Auz