Clockday aftermath...
Ah yes, back in those years we still had Clockday aftermaths on the 16th of August which sometimes resulted in another 100 save points on top of the 500+ which were already collected on Clockday.
I think this submission was a lot better than your second Clockday flash. It contained more humor and it clearly had more effort put into it. I like the 'NO NEED TO POINT OUT THE OBVIOUS' comment from the "crowd" and the scene with the Fulps.
The drawings could've been better, but if I remember correctly you do improve on that in your later flashes.
Overall 7 out of 10, 3 out of 5. I kinda liked this little short.
~Auz